Monday, December 5, 2011

Ella Nilsen - Final Shark Write-Up

Ella Nilsen

ENGL 621 – “Relief for Amity”

12/5/11

Amity Island breathed a sigh of relief yesterday as local fisherman caught an 11 foot long, 875 pound nurse shark one mile off the coast of Amity.  Police assured residents that the beaches would re-open for the Fourth of July weekend with continued precautions being taken.

“I am delighted to report that the giant killer shark that has been blamed for two gruesome deaths this week has been caught and killed,” said Police Chief Brody in a press release issued earlier today. “While law enforcement officials urge vigilance on the part of all citizens, we believe we can safely say that the danger of further shark attacks has probably passed.”

Brody noted that shark spotters from the Coast Guard, Marine Patrol, Massachusetts State Police, U.S. Navy, Homeland Security, F.B.I., and local forces should not deter residents from enjoying a weekend at the beach.

“They are simply a safety precaution that we hope will put our visitors at ease

The scene at the docks was one of utter relief and gleeful chaos.  Residents of Amity swarmed around the shark and the fisherman who caught it, Mike Swenson of Merford, MA, holding signs saying ‘Keep Our Beaches Safe.’

The shark, inspected by local marine biologist and shark expert Matt Hooper of the Woods Hole, Mass., Oceanographic Institute, was identified as a nurse shark.

“Nurse sharks are among the most brutal and dangerous of all sharks and have been responsible for hundreds of swimmers’ deaths along the East Coast of the United States,” Brody said.

Brody’s statement, however, contradicts a statement made by marine biologist Hooper. 

When asked when the last reported incidence of a nurse shark attack in the United States, Hooper replied, “There haven’t been any.”

At the first day of the Fourth of July weekend on the beach, a short-lived instance of terror fell over the beach as fins were spotted in the water.  All the residents in the water swam out as fast as they could and the shark spotters moved in.

Luckily, all were unharmed, minus a few minor bruises in the rush of escape. The culprits turned out to be, not terrible sharks, but two twelve-year-old boys, Wayne Winston and Brad Kaplan of Amity.

“He made me do it,” said Winston, pointing to his partner in crime as they faced a startled and bemused police force.

Police have handed the two over to the ‘custody’ of their parents, and the beaches will remain open as shaken residents brush off the incident and continue to enjoy their weekend.






Press Release

Ella Nilsen

ENGL 621 – Press Release

12/5/11

In the wake of two recent and deadly shark attacks, Police Chief Brody, Mayor Farley, and the Amity Board of selectmen held a meeting to address the step that needed to be taken to protect residents from further attacks this Fourth of July Weekend.

“The beaches will be closed,” said Brody, who also stated that he was installing extra summer deputies and putting shark spotters on the beaches to ensure further safety.

Brody’s announcement of the beaches closing for the next 24 hours was met by cries of disappointment from locals, many of whom are worried about losing money on Amity’s Fourth of July weekend, the biggest tourist weekend for the town. 

Closed beaches will be sure to wreak havoc on Amity’s local economy, dependent on its Fourth of July boost.

Resident bickering was broken up as local fisherman Ben Quint took his turn to speak from the back of the room.  Quint quickly captured the attention of the meeting attendees with his promise to catch the shark.

“I’ll catch this fish,” Quint said, “but it won’t be easy.”

According to Quint, it wouldn’t be cheap either.  Dismissing the $3,000 bounty for the shark posted by recent victim Alex Kintner’s mother, Marion Kintner, Quint stated that he would only accept the sum of $10,000 for the capture and killing of the shark in question.

“I’ll find him for three, but I’ll catch him and kill him for ten,” said Quint.  “For that, you get the head, the tail, the whole damn thing.”

Quint spoke with urgency, saying that the capture must happen quickly in order for calm to be restored to Amity and for the Fourth of July weekend to proceed accordingly.

The mayor and Amity board of selectmen took Quint’s proposal under advisement later in the day, and Mayor Farley recently stated that they would officially support Quint’s mission.

“We have talked to Mrs. Kintner,” said Farley.  “We will come up with $7,000 and Mrs. Kintner will come up with the remaining $3,000.”

Ella Nilsen: Sidebar - "Shark Attack in NH Seacoast Area Called Unlikely"


Ella Nilsen
ENGL 621 – “Shark Attack in New Hampshire Coastal Waters Deemed Unlikely”
12/5/11

In light of the recent shark attacks on Amity Island in Martha’s Vineyard, Massachusetts, local residents on the seacoast of New Hampshire are worried about the possibility of a shark attack in Atlantic waters closer to home.

The tragic deaths of 17-year-old Christine Watson and 10-year-old Alex Kintner on Sunday night and Monday afternoon stunned the Amity area and prompted fears of a shark getting even further north.

However, local experts maintain that a shark attack in New Hampshire waters is almost nonexistent.

“I’d say it’s slim to none,” said Elizabeth Fairchild, Professor of Marine Biology at the University of New Hampshire in an email interview.

Fairchild added, “We have occasional sightings of basking sharks (plankton eating sharks) and spiny dogfish are caught regularly here in the summer. Dogfish are very small sharks and not a risk to people.”

Even though the colder waters of New Hampshire and Maine are free of the larger shark such as the blue, mako, hammerhead, and great white, scientists in the Massachusetts Division of Marine Fisheries have recorded instances of these sharks off the coast of Massachusetts in May and June, when waters grow warmer.

“Massachusetts represents the northernmost range for several species of sharks,” says the site, adding, “Although rare, the great white shark is know to visit New England waters, keeping to itself despite its heinous reputation.”

Nevertheless, seacoast residents of New Hampshire should know that their chances of being bitten by a shark are very slim.  Not only will the cold New Hampshire coastal waters deter sharks, but the chances of fatality due to a shark-bite are incredibly rare, just one in 11.5 million. 

Swimmers on the New Hampshire coast should breath easy for now, even as those in Amity mourn the fatalities and stay away from the beach.


Sunday, December 4, 2011

NY Times Log: November 28th - 30th


Monday, November 28th:

I thought that the piece on Black Friday shopping and increased sales was an interesting and comprehensive piece that delivered good information from multiple perspectives.  They had lots of quotes from members of financial institutions such as Wells Fargo Securities, Moody’s Investors Service, and the National Retail Federation.  A research group called ShopperTrak provided additional information on consumer spending habits, which appear to be up from last year, rising 6.6 percent.  However, the Times also noted that this could be a trend that will not last long, and also discussed in detail how consumer’s shopping habits were changing due to America’s financial troubles.  Consumers are now looking to buy a few expensive and useful items for their friends and family members, rather than purchasing a lot of gifts.  The NY Times provided good quotes from consumers that showed how peoples’ habits are changing.  I thought that overall the article was well done, well organized and enlightening.

I thought the political op-ed on Newt Gingrich was interesting, in light of his recent poll surge, now showing him to be Mitt Romney’s main competitor.  The most important indicator of Gingrich’s rising popularity could be his recent endorsement by New Hampshire’s biggest (and very conservative) paper, the Union Leader.  Many thought that the Leader was going to endorse Romney, who has consistently polled well in the state, and who is logically poised to win the New Hampshire primary, due to his proximity as former governor of Massachusetts and his classic conservative values.  The article as an op-ed gave a good overview of the Gingrich campaign as well as indications and speculations on the candidate’s future.

Tuesday, November 29th:

Today’s obituary of Lana Peters, born Svetlana Stalin, daughter of the infamous Soviet dictator, was an especially well-written and interesting piece.  A lengthy article, it gave a detailed account of the fascinating and always-shifting life of Mrs. Peters, who defected from the Soviet Union and moved around between multiple countries throughout her life.  She died on November 22nd in Wisconsin, at age 85.  The story of her life as detailed by the Times was certainly intriguing.  Her early life in the Kremlin was surrounded by the terror of her father (even though he was kind to her and showered her with gifts and attention as a child, he became more cruel towards his daughter as both aged).  Additionally, Peters was shadowed by the suicide of her mother when she was six and was part of one of the most terrifying regimes in modern history.  As the Times wrote, Mrs. Peters constantly seemed to be running away from her past, and was quoted saying about her father, “He broke my life.  Wherever I go…I will always be a political prisoner of my father’s name.”

Keeping with my history-centric theme in today’s log, and of especial interest to me as a history major, I thought that the piece on Newt Gingrich’s past as a historian was very interesting.  The Times made it clear that Gingrich sees himself very much as a part of history, and models himself as an underdog political candidate who will someday be an important leader.  However, in a field of presidential candidates who constantly display an extreme lack of intelligence (Michele Bachmann, Herman Cain, and Rick Perry), the Times notes that Gingrich’s formal education and noticeable intelligence set him apart in the field of candidates.  The Times integrated quotes from other prominent historians who are seemingly skeptical of Mr. Gingrich’s success, either as a historian or a presidential candidate.

Wednesday, November 30th:

I thought that today’s headlines on the former deputy features editor at the News of the World tabloid, Paul McMullan, was purely fascinating.  The Times article was basically just straight coverage of McMullan’s judicial hearing in London the day before, but is fascinating because of the content of McMullan’s testimony.  McMullan comes off as an unapologetic and slightly crazed tabloid-monger who would do truly anything to pursue a story (including posing as a young boy to trap a pedophile priest).  Furthermore, as the Times notes, he seemed completely unapologetic about his actions and the actions of his colleagues at News of the World.  He maintained that hacking was a very useful tool that journalists should be able to use freely.  McMullan was quoted as saying, “Phone hacking is a perfectly acceptable tool, given the sacrifices we make, if all we’re trying to do is get the truth.”  He furthermore asked the question, do “we really want to live in a world where the only people who do the hacking are MI5 and MI6?” before resolutely responding in the negative.  He seemed to believe that News of the World was an organization crusading for the truth, and using whatever means they could to obtain it.

McMullan is a completely wacky, slimy, and interesting specimen of a person, at one point making a show in his courtroom by dragging out topless photos of Carla Bruni-Sarkozy, the first lady of France, causing the Times writer to comment, “apparently to show how easy it is to obtain racy photographs.” He gleefully detailed car chases with celebrities, phone hacking, drug-taking and more daredevil and illegal hijinks in pursuit of tabloid news.  A fascinating subject, McMullan made the Times article on him equally as interesting. 

Monday, November 28, 2011

Jaws Story - Second Issue

Ella Nilsen

An idyllic afternoon at Village Beach turned horrific as 10 year old Alex Kintner of Mayfair Court in Amity was killed by what police said appears to be a shark attack.  This comes a day after the discovery of local teen Christine Watson’s mangled body washed up on South Beach.

“Alex Kintner was killed in what appears – and I stress the word appears – to have been a vicious and unprovoked shark attack,” said Chief of Police Martin Brody.

Brody’s statement comes just a few hours after a press conference with the police, Mayor Bob Farley, and Medical Examiner Robert Niven had emphatically denied that Watson’s death was due to a shark attack, blaming the 17-year-old’s death instead on a freak motor-boating accident.

At a local press release held on Watson’s death, medical examiner Dr. Robert Nevin confirmed that the autopsy on Watson had pointed to an unfortunate encounter with a propeller, and stated, “I’ve been here thirty years, and this looks like any other motor-boating accident.”

Brody insisted he still could not confirm that Kintner’s death had been caused by a shark attack.  “We hasten to ask the press not to jump to any conclusions regarding the perpetrator or perpetrators in this tragic incident,” he said in a press release.

Nevertheless, Brody admitted that there were similar characteristics in both deaths.  “We now believe that it may be possible that the Watson death could also maybe have been linked to possible shark activities in the vicinity of Amity,” said Brody.  “That investigation is ongoing.”

At Village Beach, the scene was nothing short of hysterical as beach-goers suddenly noticed a growing red stain of blood in the ocean water, not far from where Alex Kintner had been paddling on a yellow rubber raft.  Chaos broke out as young children ran screaming from the water and their parents yelled for them on the beach.  Kintner was not among the hordes of children who were able to run to safety.  His body remains missing.

Brody expressed the town’s sincere condolences to the family of Alex Kintner, and announced that he would be holding a meeting at 6 p.m. tonight along with Mayor Farley and the Amity Board of Selectmen.  Among the business that will be discussed will be a plan to close the beaches for the Fourth of July weekend.  However, the beaches will remain open for the rest of the day, as Brody announced no beach closings in the press release.

Jaw Story - First Issue

Ella Nilsen

The mangled body of a local teenage girl was discovered on a remote section of South Beach around 6 a.m. this morning.  Questions remain on how she died as police and local officials assured residents that the beaches would be stay for the Fourth of July weekend.

“The Amity Police Department is investigating the tragic death of a teenage girl near one of our fine beaches Sunday night,” said Amity Police Chief Martin Brody in a press release.

The facts of the case remain murky. Christine W. Watson, 17, of 23 Sharkstooth St., Amity Island and a senior at Amity High School, was last seen alive with Christopher P. Hoggenbottam III, another local teen who is a sophomore at Trinity College.  The two were seen leaving a beach party on South Beach together at around 11 p.m. Sunday night. 

Both Watson and Hoggenbottam had reportedly been drinking heavily and possibly smoking marijuana at the party.

Watson, an excellent swimmer who was a member of the varsity swim team at Amity High School and a lifeguard at the Amity Island YMCA pool, entered the water at a remote section of South Beach near the South Beach Shoal bell buoy.  Weather and sea temperatures and conditions at the time were fairly mild.

According to Hoggenbottam, he did not follow Watson into the water due to his inebriation. After noticing that she had not returned from the water, he notified police around 6 a.m. this morning. Watson’s body was recovered after a short search.

Police are currently investigating the cause of death.  Watson’s body was severely mauled by an attacker of unknown origin. The body is currently at the coroner’s office post-autopsy. No charges have yet been filed.

At a local press release, medical examiner Dr. Robert Nevin confirmed that the autopsy had been performed, and stated that all evidence pointed to a motor-boating accident.

“I’ve been here thirty years, and this looks like any other motor-boating accident,” said Nevin.

Police Chief Brody stated that police were thoroughly searching the harbor-master’s logs and interviewing local boaters to try to find anyone who was boating in local waters at the time.

Nevin and police, however, are still not ruling out the possibility of a shark attack or homicide, pending investigation.  Nevertheless, they emphatically ensured residents that the beaches were safe and would remain open to the public for the Fourth of July weekend, which is Amity Island’s biggest of the season.

“This was so far away from where people swim, we’re just not worried about it,” said Amity Mayor Larry Vaughn.

“We want to assure all residents and visitors on our fine island that they are in no danger,” added Brody.  Our lovely beaches will remain open for swimming pending the outcome of the investigation.”

Cover Letter - This American Life


Ella Nilsen
60 Strafford Avenue, Apt. K3
Durham, NH
03824

Dear This American Life Staff,

I wish to work for This American Life simply because I recognize the importance of a good story.  I love listening to people and the stories they have to tell.  Throughout my college career, I’ve interviewed dozens of people and by doing so; have gained more insight into the world around me than I could any other way. 

I grew up the classic National Public Radio kid.  Living in Northern New Hampshire, seemingly the only place in the world without a television signal, my parents kept the radio on all day.  The shows of NPR and the voices of thousands of people surrounded me from a very early age, always telling me their stories. 

I would be an excellent addition to the intern staff at This American Life because of my dedication, work ethic, and story-telling ability.  I have a very distinct voice in my writing that I believe would add to the program.  I would love to gain the experience of producing a radio show.  As I have been involved in the production of numerous print publications, I think the opportunity to do this in radio would be incredibly rewarding.

My journalism experience is extensive.  As a freshman in college, I joined the staff of the University of New Hampshire’s only student magazine, Main Street Magazine, and have learned so much from my experience with the publication. I started the now permanent music reviews and interviews section, interviewing artists and musicians including Passion Pit, the Smith Westerns, Wild Beasts, and Kap Slap. 

I have written many other pieces for the magazine as well, and as the Design Editor, helped transform the magazine’s layout and appearance.  I have grown with the magazine and feel an extremely strong connection to it.  Additionally, I have had three pieces to date published in the UNH school newspaper, The New Hampshire, and plan to publish more.  I have extensive experience with research as well, having completed a university funded research project on my own family’s history and Jewish heritage.

I am very experienced with the programs Adobe Photoshop and InDesign, and am going to be learning digital editing and Pro Tools this coming semester.  I have extensive experience interviewing subjects for research and investigative articles, as well as music interviews.  I am about to start my first extensive investigative piece on the Northern Pass in Northern New Hampshire, a proposed line of electrical towers that is vehemently opposed and being fought by New Hampshire residents.

I can be reached at elheafield@gmail.com.  I eagerly await your reply!

Sincerely,

Ella Nilsen